Here is the start of a story i can never finish, lately its because i've been having writers block any who here you go...

"All i want to do is feel again!" this was the last thing i had screamed at him the last time i saw him.I screamed these seven hurtful words. your probably wondering who i am, my name is eliza, i married a man named edwin about a year ago. hes never home anymore. It was like the perfect marriage for the first 6 months, then he stopped coming home for three days straight, or there'd be mysterious phone calls. i know most women would automatically think "AFAIR!" but i just don't see that happening. let's go back alittle when i first met him he was shy worked nights with me at this really cool night club for "nerds" who like too dress up like vampires and frankensteins; i remember one time him saying: "it reminds me of home". First night there he trained me as a cocktail waitress, the minute i saw him i knew i was inlove. He had these sexy blue saphire eyes, and his hair was this dirty/sandy blonde hair. Every time he turned his head his dirty blonde hair would sway to the right over his eyes, so magically. I thought it odd that such a hansomw man had snowy white skin; as if you touched him, he'd be cold. but who am i to talk? i was born with mid-night black hair, when i turned eight-teen i put three red streaks the color of blood in my hair; every six months i would fix them. Then after i turned twentyone i didn't have too anymore they just sorda became apart of me.


Two days later:
I herd edwins voice last night its been almost a week since i've herd or even seen him. That was bifore "They" came for me, i don't know who they are. They keep calling edwin saying they found the "Treasure". Whatever that means?

(thats all i got PLEASE comment)