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 story part 6
Again, comments would be nice... Even "I like football" or something...


Kaya and Vlad walked together. As they walked, the surrounding area grew brighter. The sun was coming up, and animals began to stir. A sleepy owl hooted from a nearby treebranch. A weasel scurried across their path, looking for food. Kaya smiled at it.

The back of her neck was prickling. Someone was watching her. She looked over at Vlad, and discovered it was him. Kaya almost immediately looked away, the smile fading from her lips.

The silence between them was deafening. The air seemed to waver with the awkwardness. Why did it feel this way? Conversation came forcedly and ended quickly. Mostly, they just looked at their surroundings and marvelled at the beauty.

A waterfall brought water to a small pond. The fallind droplets reflected the light, and a rainbow formed off of its side. The liquid was so clean, they could see themselves in it. Lillypads floated along the glassy surface. Frogs and fish swam in the water, and darted out of sight as Kaya dipped her hand in the pond. Vlad and Kaya quickly washed up before continuing with their journey.

Kaya was nervous around Vlad. She didn't know why... She couldn't seem to look at him, and her heart beat faster every time he looked at her. He was the first one not to be scared when he found out what she was... and yet... It didn't feel as good as she thought it would have. Kaya thought that she would be able to talk to him, and be his friend. But that didn't seem to be happening...

Vlad couldn't help but keep glancing over to her, even if it was just to make sure she was there. He didn't know why... Every time she looked away, his heart dropped. Was Kaya trying to avoid him? Yesterday he was trying to get rid of her, but now... Vlad wanted her to stay, more than anything.

Was this love?


Yeah, yeah, it's short... comment and I'll post more next time!Tongue out
    Posted by MAK on 2007-11-03 15:51:57 | Rating: | Views: 78
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I can't be the only one reading this and enjoying it! Keep it going MAK.
Posted by  2rivers  on 2007-11-03 17:01:12 
  
Don't worry about it being short. I find it easier to read that way.

So this is the romantic part of the story, huh? It was inevitable. They were probably made for each other. But that's just my opinion.

I'll try my best not to be jealous about Vlad because Kaya is freaking hot and he's the only guy around her.

Keep it up. Don't strain yourself though. Remember: Have fun.
Posted by  SubTomato  on 2007-11-03 19:42:47 
  
lol, OMG SubTomato, that is the best comment I've ever had XD !!!
I laughed sooo damn hard!!!!
Posted by  MAK  on 2007-11-04 13:51:40 
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