
Posted by
angelwings
on 2008-05-09 05:17:22 |
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"One more soul sparkles there"
WOW!
You are one talented guy, Long.
Your poems have this soothing effect, the words you choose are so beautiful...they create the most dazzling image.
Beautiful and touching entry.
Beautiful imagination too....loved this. |
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Posted by
Long
on 2008-05-09 06:55:33 |
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Posted by
EasyToSay
on 2008-05-09 07:36:22 |
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Hmmm so descriptive, thanks for sharing your imagery.
Really good. |
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Posted by
Nutshell
on 2008-05-10 10:55:38 |
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Posted by
dreampower
on 2008-05-10 15:28:43 |
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Long
The words here are magical almost...like a dream....I particularly liked the last line....very nice..S |
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Posted by
Long
on 2008-05-10 18:49:02 |
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Thanks guys.
The 1st anniversary of my SM's death is tomorrow so it has been playing on my mind a little (OK a lot).
So I thought I'd write a piece that made how it happen seem more peaceful, dream like as dreampower said. |
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