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 Challenge 39 - The profound in the mundane
So said she to the Ghost of Time.
"What I have is mine, not thine.
I've worked for love and circumstance,
Lived my life to laugh and dance,
Borne my children, cried and smiled,
Trekked across ten thousand mile
and should I turn and say to you
I have as yet no more to do
'Twould not be true.
For I have so much more to sample
A score more years should be ample."
She took a breath and went to add ...
The Ghost stepped in a looking sad
Said "Madam, whilst I feel your fears,
Hear your cries and see your tears,
I gave a gift of life to you
That you have used it well, 'tis true.
But someone needs that time anew
and so ... Adieu."


Sue
    Posted by Keep_Left on 2009-07-27 22:42:11 | Rating: | Views: 62
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Sad but true. And so beautifully expressed. We should all mediate on this.

Steve
Posted by  stevehayes13  on 2009-07-27 23:25:48 
  
Thanks Steve, rather think of it a celebration of a life well lived and a new one yet to come. Sue
Posted by  Keep_Left  on 2009-07-28 00:50:12 
  
Very nice, loved this.
Posted by  circe  on 2009-07-28 12:54:32 
  
Thanks Circe!
Posted by  Trewblue  on 2009-07-28 17:14:41 
  
As Gandalf says, this is just one of the stages we go through. More before, more after.
Posted by  lynbarnes  on 2009-07-28 18:51:48 
  
I like to believe that we make choices everytime we come around. Ech time we have something to learn.... this time with me I think it's patience, and I'm probably going to have to repeat the lesson!
Posted by  Keep_Left  on 2009-07-28 23:00:20 
  
Wistful. Nice job on the challenge.
Posted by  greunie  on 2009-07-28 20:30:37 
  
Many thanks Greunie.
Posted by  Keep_Left  on 2009-07-28 23:01:13 
  
Very nice KL. :)
Posted by  purpleflowersbyth...  on 2009-07-31 14:16:32 
  
Very well done indeed! It's difficult to appreciate just how fleeting life really is.
Posted by  Wheresmycoffee  on 2009-08-18 14:57:54 
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