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Wrinkled shirt hanging on a dining room chair
Form fit jeans crumpled on the floor
Bra and panties in the entry of the bedroom
Heels kicked off at the door
Button up shirt half unbottoned
Ripped the rest of the way down
Camo shorts thrown in the corner
Evidence of passion scattered all on the ground
Candles burnt down to the end
Music played all night long
Sleeping lovers breathe easy
Nothing in the world could be wrong
Her head on his chest, leg wrapped around him
His lips inches from her face
His breathing is deep, breathing her in
Their hearts a matching pace
The sun is rising, to wake the peaceful
A night to remember in thier minds
They smile and thier lips meet
True love shines in thier eyes
I wrote it then looked back at it and just couldn't get completely satisfied with. I may have to completely rework it but I'm tired so it stays up as is today.
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really nice.
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Posted by anonimo1922
on 2008-08-17 20:07:06
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that was good
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Posted by DouglasMB
on 2008-08-17 20:26:39
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that was so awesome.
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Posted by Angel_Crank
on 2008-08-17 21:07:46
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