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Okayy... well, my babygirll wrote this poem I will be sharing with you. Her name is Christina/Chr!st!Na and she basically told me what to write for this blog entry since I didn't know what to put and how to word it and how she wanted it and all that jazz. So here we go..
She has always had dreams and visions about waking up one day in the same bed as me. She has wanted it to happen since the day we started going out, April 13, 2008. She wanted the sheets and pillows to be white and it would be really early in the morning and the sun would be shining down on me... Which explains her inspirations on how she wrote this poem:
"to wake up one day about 6'am;
with the sun subtly peeking around the curtains;
with one arm bent, other stretched out across the mattress;
see her face buried between the crest of the snow white pillows and the disfigured limb;
sheets, fluffed a radiant white, a canopy to her sensitive bare skin;
admiring the innocence of a 'sleeping beauty';
the soft spoken angel whispers "come back to sleep";
with an affectionate hold on her new found love;
pulling 'her' arm closer to her heart;
soothing skin caressed 'her' arm;
peering into what seem to be comatose eyes;
but she know exactly of what she has done;
tenderly opening eyes stared back;
suddenly drawn in for an intense exchange;
it was slowly but surely, soft but passionate;
realized the loved was shared;
her hand lifted from the limb to the face;
the touch of the cold silver sent chills down the spine;
it was the way it was supposed to be:
Perfect."
I thought it was really sweet ^.^... What do you all think?
comments pleaz?? Thank you so much!
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Posted by Jesskunup on 2008-07-17 17:34:39 | Rating: | Views: 272
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I really like this. Your girlfriend's got a way with words!
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Posted by ScarletBlack
on 2008-07-18 03:06:55
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I thought it was beautiful, but scary from one so young.
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Posted by overthehillandfar...
on 2008-07-18 09:24:40
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thanks for the comment. I think you are right about kids our age.
but I deffinatley do agree your girlfriend has a magnificent way with words.
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Posted by hannahxgrahamx
on 2008-07-18 22:35:26
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she's really good with words!
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Posted by my_name_is_teah
on 2008-07-24 09:03:53
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Wow again. This was amazing, and very good. So descriptive :)
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Posted by EasyToSay
on 2008-07-26 08:30:47
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