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The sun on my face and the wind in my hair
Such a perfect day but i'm in such despair
why can't you be here this is so unfair
i need your smile i want your touch
an emptyness in me that needs to be filled and no one but you can fill it
do you feel my pain tell me baby do you feel it?
an undying fire that will not die can you kill it can you kill it?
can you feel the burning can you can you feel it?
Staring out the glass foggy from my breath
How can the day be so happy when inside i'm cold as death
That girl out there she's got her guy
Lucky thing i want mine
i miss him so bad i cry mself to sleep
your abscense is what causes me to suddenly stop thinking
the pain is poison that i just can't stop drinking
with you gone my heart and soul are slowly sinking
where are you arms the walls that keep me standing?
a hole in my heart that needs to be filled and no one but you can fill it
do you feel my pain baby tell me do you feel it?
an undying fire that won't desparse can you kill it for me kill it?
can you feel the burning baby do you feel it?
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whoah! ur really poetic. this was awesome stuff!
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-18 15:25:02
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yeah, well... i gotta be in the mood. but ur really good too. u think this is good but have u ever read UR stuff??? o wait--u had 2 have...
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Posted by Hunterrrrxisxamazing
on 2008-06-18 16:06:26
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wow. this is awesum. i wish i could write poetry like that. i cant write it for shit thought! aha
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Posted by xmidnightxwingsx
on 2008-06-18 22:49:06
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bet u could if u tried!! 4 shit at least. i'd give u shit 4 trying--r u sure thats what u want?? haha just messin with ya noves, thanks 4 commenting
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Posted by Hunterrrrxisxamazing
on 2008-06-18 23:54:22
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