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 The Truth About Sally
[Okay, before I make the same mistake as last time, this is a poem that I WROTE. I put my heart and soul into every word. So Don't even think about trying to steal it and use it for your own. You didn't write it. If you're that pathetically horrible at writing that you have to go and steal other people's work than maybe you should find a different hobby. Okay, here it is.]

Sally is a girl.
She's never had much to offer the world.
Why would she?
Nothing has ever been offered to her.
Her brother's the only one who cares.
But he's never there.
He couldn't hack it.
All she has is his old jean jacket.
Mom's a recluse.
She block's out the world,
Stares off into space,
Won't even look her daughter in the face.
Daddy's never home.
Unless he's drunk,
Blind,
With something young on his mind.
Something unresponsive,
To sink his demons into,
Something to use.
It doesn't matter who she is,
Or that she's his little girl.
He doesn't even know.
He doesn't even care.
This is the cross she's forced to bare.
It hardly seems fair.
Does it?
She doesn't complain.
How could she?
She stopped talking at the age of thirteen.
That doesn't compare to fifteen.
The headlines would have read:
"Date rape outside of Club Red."
But nothing was said.
Nobody knew.
Nobody cared.
It's just the cross she's forced to bare.
It hardly seems fair.
Sixteen-
She took a tab of ecstasy.
She liked the way the lights changed colors.
She liked the way her skin tingled.
So she did it again.
And made herself a lot of new friends.
They seemed nice.
They tied the tourniquet just right.
And took her on a brand new ride.
She wasn't scared.
It's just the cross she was made to bare.
Or at least that's what they told her.
One night she tried to fly.
She was seventeen and had the time.
Or at least that what they told her.
They said,
"Die young and have a good looking corpse."
But where were they on December fourth?
Two people dressed in black.
Screaming inside to get that little girl back.
Her brother-
Tears in his eyes,
And their mother at his side.
His fists clenched,
Longing for a neck to wrench.
But they weren't there.
This is the cross she was made to bare.
It hardly seems fair.
She had nothing to offer.
There was no way to save her.
Only a wooden box could cage her.
This is the truth about Sally.
Sally was a girl.
What's wrong with this world?
    Posted by HugWhore33 on 2007-11-20 09:57:15 | Rating: | Views: 124
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hi hug!
YIKES!
that's some kinda heavy stuff...
i hope it's just a poem, but i guess it's true somewhere often enough...
ps. won't steal it - it's too much for my sentiments... ;o)
well done.
:o)
cheers!
Posted by  badlydrawnstickman  on 2007-11-20 10:17:56 
  
Thanks!
Don't worry, it's fictional.
But I did put a lot of my feelings into it.
Posted by  HugWhore33  on 2007-11-20 14:31:27 
  
I love it! You are such an awesome writer and I love to read what you write. Your so good at it.

kirsten
Posted by  inlove06  on 2007-11-20 14:40:07 
  
This is really great.
It reminds me a lot of one of my favorite movies, Thirteen.
Posted by  xoxogossipgirl  on 2007-11-21 12:40:49 
  
Thirteen is a very good movie :]
Posted by  HugWhore33  on 2007-11-21 13:29:06 
  
hugs you, it is beautiful and powerful.
hon, no one should steal your writing, always put cr and your name beside/initals beside your work
Posted by  kentlass  on 2007-11-21 16:35:50 
  
kinda stirs the soul.
great post
Posted by  trevorjohn  on 2007-11-22 06:57:28 
  
I agree with the first paragraph. We shouldn't steal other peoples thoughts unless we somehow were thinking exactly the same thing and wrote EXACTLY the same words. I don't know what the chances of that are. I wish you a peace of mind, HugWhore33.
Posted by  SubTomato  on 2007-11-22 10:18:38 
  
I'm glad to hear it is fictional, but I'm wondering how close to home it might be.
Posted by  Pauligan  on 2007-11-23 17:29:07 
  
i agree with one of the previous posts definately reminds me of the movie thirteen...and a little bit of the movie speak, just a little bit. the whole young girl being neglected, always hits hard...its a great poem. you write very well.
Posted by  coffeeloverr  on 2007-12-16 19:22:52 
  
I know I am late here, but what a great piece of work! I got lost in it...scary place to be..but nice to get lost in something sometimes!
Posted by  Rajah1116  on 2007-12-21 13:48:21 
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