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When....?
This might seem a bit amateurish or not so well written, but was something I was working on when the kids were napping this afternoon......

When will we get to be together?
Why do they not understand?
How much longer will I feel this emptiness inside?

I've never felt more alone than I do right now.
Every little thing reminds me of you.
I think back to those nights just lying and cuddling in bed.
Those nights when we just laid together talking.
Those nights we spent just making each other laugh.

When will we get to be together?
Why do they not understand?
How much longer will I feel this emptiness inside?

The sound of planes brings tears to my eyes, knowing it took you away from here.
The emptiness of the bed brings me many sleepless nights.
Touching your hand, feeling your lips, embracing one another is all that I long for.

When will we get to be together?
Why do they not understand?
How much longer will I feel this emptiness inside?

When will love conquer all?
When will we be back together?
When...........?
Posted by Forgetmeknot on 2008-01-11 17:01:38 | Rating: | Views: 73


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Posted by
theotherjim
on 2008-01-11 17:12:15
 
That hits it right on the spot. Thank you.
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-01-12 06:07:40
 
That is neither amateurish or badly written
it is beautiful because it comes from your heart
wonderfull words honey xx
i hope you are together again soon x
hugs x
 
 

Posted by
scotslad60
on 2008-01-12 16:38:13
 
wow hon. I knew that talent was in there. Good to see it coming out, just wish it was for a different reason. I love it though. I love you. XX
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-01-13 10:00:43
 
I feel what you wrote so it is done very well, D. The happily ever after is right around the corner.
 
 


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