Posted by
dreampower
on 2008-05-10 16:28:02 |
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| Sound like he is dying as the light fades from his eyes and she loves him a lot as she is screaming at the thought of losing him...He is wanting to say the things he wants to say before he leaves this world....things she needs to hear....things like 'I love you'...S |
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Posted by
smileforthecamera
on 2008-05-10 17:04:20 |
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| unnoticed and out of hope. |
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Posted by
2marie
on 2008-05-11 13:54:45 |
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| That's very good writing Michael. I'd say the same thing that dreampower said. :] |
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Posted by
Foheskiy
on 2008-05-12 11:37:17 |
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| No, no.... I didn't write that. I can't remember where I found it. I just wanted to get some opinions about it... I'm not positive, but I think it was written by Sylvia Plath, an amazing poet and author. |
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Posted by
2marie
on 2008-05-12 20:08:00 |
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Posted by
yadokta
on 2008-05-23 14:12:27 |
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| it makes me feel relaxed and content but sad, that may not make any sense to you. Glad your writting poetry again even if its not yours. I like the way you present it. |
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Posted by
BlackRoseWriter14
on 2008-07-04 12:38:24 |
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