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Sleeping, dreaming,
Running away.
I need to drown myself.
I need to slash myself.
Maybe I should blow
Myself away.
I wish I'd never entered
This world.
The pain is unbearable.
I can't wait for
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Posted by Faith on 2008-07-09 16:23:36 | Rating: | Views: 76
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I wish id never entered this world thats how I fell
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Posted by lostarm
on 2008-07-09 21:23:26
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Thx for your comment lostarm. I do hope you feel better. I think the world wants both of us in it even though it seems like everything is wrong.
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Posted by Faith
on 2008-07-10 13:53:38
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Wonderful poem. I hope that you don't really feel that way. I think the world wants you and lostarm in it. Ya'll take care of yourselves!!! Please for a caring comrade.
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Posted by Fancie
on 2008-07-10 14:16:47
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Fancie - In poetry death is one of the most interesting subjects to write about. Jim Morrison usually wrote about it. This day I was feeling it. I guess alot of the time I feel it. I have a very darkside.
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Posted by Faith
on 2008-07-10 14:49:42
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This is a great poem. Sort of describes the way I have been feeling lately. Sort of like why should I even be alive? Not suicidal, you know just really bad.
Take care of yourself.
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Posted by Emmy
on 2008-07-10 14:59:16
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lilD - Thanks for the comment. I want you here & I'm sure you father does to. Take care of yourself.
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Posted by Faith
on 2008-07-12 13:08:01
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Alot of emotion there.... it's good to get it out
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Posted by DouglasMB
on 2008-07-21 17:42:01
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We all have dark sides...its just something we are usually afraid to show..Glad you're letting your free!
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Posted by dreampower
on 2008-07-27 19:34:29
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