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 Everyone's Girl
Pain is all she feels.
She cries out.
Those who here keep
Their fingers crossed.
This female needs.
It's not a joke.
She craves.
She bleeds.
Who is there to listen?
To wipe away the tears.
To tell her not to fall.
Hold on.
Death is not ready.

She cries out again.
We sympathize once more.
We cross our fingers
Begging her to stay.
We wait.
We hope.
We pray.
It's just to soon.

She sees a light.
It's at the end of a long tunnel.
As she walks toward it,
She feels the warmth of the
Sun on here face.
The voices begin to lessen.
She keeps going.
"I want to live" she proclaims.

As she reaches into the light
She looks in wonder at
All the beauty the world
Has to offer.
She wills herself to make
Peace with her pain.

We allĀ  witness the demise
of her fear.
She is shaded now in warmth
and wonder.
A butterfly lands on her finger.
Her brown hair flows in the wind.
We sigh with relief.
She is going to be o.k.
    Posted by Faith on 2008-06-26 13:22:19 | Rating: | Views: 87
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That is wonderful. I hope that it helps a lot of people find the end of the tunnel and the light that is there.
Posted by  Fancie  on 2008-06-26 13:27:37 
  
Thx Fancie. Looks like your my #1 fan.
You always have something nice to say.
Posted by  Faith  on 2008-06-26 14:06:20 
  
Thanks Faith. I love your poetry. I can write, but never been much good at poetry. You are great! Haven't you had something published somewhere. If you have tell us about it.
Posted by  Fancie  on 2008-06-26 14:16:55 
  
I actually do have 3 poems published. 2 in 2 different anthologies and 1 in a regular book. I got some kind of award. Some paper thing. I don't remember what it was or for which poem. It has yet to pay off though. Maybe someday.
Posted by  Faith  on 2008-06-27 12:16:15 
  
'We all witness the demise of her fear.' I love that line.Great read.
Posted by  Wickedlovely826  on 2008-06-27 14:00:59 
  
You are a great poet. Why not blog and tell us about the awards you have gotten. You are a real poet!
Posted by  Emmy  on 2008-07-01 20:13:59 
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