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And then there were none,
No souls to ease this
Constant ache.
My heart is in ashes,
Consumed by the fires
Of pain.
A pain I cannot reach.
The pen is my blade,
Bleeding words I dare
Not utter.
Emotions on alert.
The pass me by in a
Whirlwind,
Never saying hello.
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Posted by Faith on 2008-07-07 15:49:11 | Rating: | Views: 57
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That is a wonderful poem. I loved it. But it's so sad. Sometime I'd really like to hear a happy poem from you.
Take care of you!
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Posted by Fancie
on 2008-07-07 15:56:34
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Loved the poem. You really are a great poet. It's amazing that you put into words exactly the way that I feel now.
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Posted by Emmy
on 2008-07-07 16:32:05
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this is beautiful. i think that people opening their hearts up through writing is the most beautiful thing in the world. being trusted with a bleeding heart is an honor. i love your writing
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Posted by ReD_MooN
on 2008-07-07 22:24:53
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Wow.This is amazing.I love it.
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Posted by Wickedlovely826
on 2008-07-08 15:34:03
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Thank you so much ReD MooN & Wickedlovely for you great comments. It means alot to me that people like my poetry.
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Posted by Faith
on 2008-07-09 15:44:53
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And thx Fancie & Emmy for your wonderful comments also.
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Posted by Faith
on 2008-07-09 15:45:49
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That is a great poem, I loved it thank you for posting it
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Posted by DouglasMB
on 2008-07-21 17:42:57
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