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The Thing: Chapter 2
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One day Lyly went walking through the woods as a memorial to The Thing. Sadly she walked to the place where she saw him and she felt the blood on his hand. She saw a piece of paper on the ground with a drawing with a girl Thing and a Child size Thing. She realized that was his family and they might still be alive. She walked back to the home where she lived and packed her duffle bag and went exploring in the woods. She had walked deep into the woods and decided to make camp. She looked at the note her father left her before he died. The people from the village made a fire to burn our house down. That was the reason she was deadly afraid of people ecspecially at the village she lived at. After observing the note her father left her and the one the thing left for her she realized they both were clues. This was bigger than she thought it was at first. She decided to go on walking using the notes as a map in a way she did not understand completely. After going way further she saw another note it was from both the thing and her father, It was a map. She finally realized why they killed her father. They wanted to get information about the thing. She realized the raider will be following her so she covered her tracks and did not make camp until she was past the Village limets. She ran very quickly towards the land marks memorizing each one instead of marking it. If the raiders saw her marks they would follow them very closly. She found a camp with spears and bones. She knew it was the Things family.
Posted by Fairy on 2008-04-22 11:13:10 | Rating: n/a | Views: 60


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Posted by
Aphrodite
on 2008-04-22 12:27:40
 
Very interesting story!
 
 

Posted by
Fairy
on 2008-04-22 13:01:10
 
Thank you
 
 

Posted by
Fairy
on 2008-04-22 13:01:21
 
Thank you
 
 

Posted by
olenbeacker99
on 2008-04-22 14:56:18
 
Pretty Interesting Fairy
 
 

Posted by
badlydrawnstickman
on 2008-05-03 13:01:19
 
...the plot thickens...!!
i like that you keep it moving at a good pace but don't be afraid to put in some explanation too...this whole thing about the raiders and the house burning and so on is a little unclear...although i understand that you are building it into the story as you go....
cheers!!
:)
 
 


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