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Aphrodite
on 2008-04-22 12:27:40 |
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Posted by
Fairy
on 2008-04-22 13:01:10 |
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Posted by
Fairy
on 2008-04-22 13:01:21 |
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Posted by
olenbeacker99
on 2008-04-22 14:56:18 |
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Posted by
badlydrawnstickman
on 2008-05-03 13:01:19 |
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...the plot thickens...!!
i like that you keep it moving at a good pace but don't be afraid to put in some explanation too...this whole thing about the raiders and the house burning and so on is a little unclear...although i understand that you are building it into the story as you go....
cheers!!
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