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A Feeling... a poem

I am, torn apart

I feel a deep burning
yearning in my heart

A yearning that will
never be quenched

Even by tears, it won't
become drenched

For an emotion like
this can't ever go away

Though you ignore it,
in your soul it shall stay

Posted by Evita on 2008-12-17 22:36:21 | Rating:

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sounds like a pretty deep wound.

Posted by Orums on 2008-12-18 01:03:33

i can really relate to this.
im sorry...
i know exactly how you feel..
-Nova

Posted by xmidnightxwingsx on 2008-12-19 16:39:48

(ITS MY OWN POEM AS A ANSWER FOR YOUR POEM)

ALL I KNOW IS THAT,
I CANT SEE YOU D WAY LIKE THAT,
BE SOME STRONG,
NO ONE WILL WALK WITH ALL THE LIFE ALONG,
THERE IS NO PLACE,
WHERE THE LOVERS BELONG,
ITS THE GRAVE,MY BABE,
WHERE WE WILL GET PEACE,
SO I CRY I BEG YOU PLEASE,
DONT BE SO SAD,
COZ WHEN U LIKE THAT,
I CANT SEE U D WAY LIKE THAT......AFTERGLOW

Posted by ROHIT_GANGOTIA on 2008-12-28 00:54:01