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 Scribbles #51
Fall

The end of summer’s caress bears the mantle.
It is shed to bare my skin to the autumn chill,
that tickles my spine.

Swathed in the glory of lamb's wool,
to comfort against the death of the sun's rays.
Borne witness by the lifeless maple leaf,
crunching beneath my feet.

As the passing of so many seasons have been witnessed before,
So shall she pass, with reluctance; fall.
That the gnarled hand of father winter,
shall take into his grasp the fragments of autumn's past.

When the end of autumn’s caress will bear the mantle,
and that mantle is shed to bare my skin to the winter frost,
that stiffens my spine.

Swathed in the glory of silky down,
To comfort against the death of autumn's caress.
To leave me with the reluctance of her passing;

fall…
    Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-11-03 00:53:57 | Rating: | Views: 82
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beautifully done.. truly captured the essence..
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-11-03 01:28:35 
  
Elegaic.
Posted by  stevehayes13  on 2009-11-03 02:07:36 
  
Nice word
Posted by  desinq  on 2009-11-03 02:17:39 
  
I am so delighted, this reads like I romanticise the feeling of what it must be like to have 4 distinct seasons and their change.
Posted by  desinq  on 2009-11-03 02:21:16 
  
Pastor- I have been absent a bit more than usual, but this one pulled at me a bit... Thank You...

Steve- I am honored... Thank You

Desinq- Which word? O,o HEHEH Thanks...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-11-03 02:22:14 
  
Fantastic is about the only word that comes to mind, E!
Posted by  Wheresmycoffee  on 2009-11-03 04:11:37 
  
Awesome job! There are some very talented people here at Thoughts :)
Posted by  kellie1979  on 2009-11-03 05:36:30 
  
very nice man.
i like it alot
i love the words you used: "gnarled, 'shed to bare my skin"
lots of imagery.
excellent write!
Posted by  RomeosMadWorld  on 2009-11-03 07:34:13 
  
you always take me away to some magical place,where I get lost in your words...thank you for that...
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-11-03 09:49:46 
  
Superb. Classic E, if I may be so bold.
Posted by  Perigo_Minas  on 2009-11-03 11:24:24 
  
As opposed to the way you have?

Fall is about endings...like you said.
Posted by  lynbarnes  on 2009-11-03 22:43:28 
  
Coffeedude- You are fantastic! Thanks...

Kellie- And you are one of them...

Romeo- LOOOONG time no see brother. Glad to hear from you. Appreciate the comments...

Monica- I am no magician that is for sure... Glad to take you someplace serene...

Perigo- I would expect nothing less of you my friend.... Thank You...

Lyn- My way is a crude path next to the prestine cobblestone road that you create...
Thank You my lady...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-11-03 23:53:03 
  
pshaww!
Posted by  lynbarnes  on 2009-11-05 15:15:05 
  
eeeeeeee gads, you are good!
Posted by  roe  on 2009-11-04 11:47:43 
  
beautiful piece, well done!
Posted by  consciousentity  on 2009-11-04 22:06:25 
  
Roe- Thank you....

Concious- I appreciate it...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-11-04 23:41:21 
  
Swept away, once again, by the magic of E :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-11-10 08:46:42 
  
Damn, Evets. I know that it's good... really good... better than anything I could do... and do you know how I know that? Because I can't begin to tell you why it's good.
Posted by  dreadnaught  on 2009-11-11 03:22:57 
  
Boots- You are too much... Thank You...

Dread- You are far to modest... Never could I produce the splendor that I have read from you... I am humbled...

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Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-11-11 10:35:58 
  
Glad I found your site....great!
Posted by  uncle_charlie  on 2009-11-13 12:07:36 
  
Glad you enjoyed Uncle C...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-11-14 14:57:11 
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