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 Scribbles #48
 
2012+1

     The sun rests low on the horizon; a red stain across the sky. Like blood pooled in the corners of the world. It gives proof to the death of the earth, its populace now gone, except for me. But I am only one.

     Nothing serves a purpose anymore. Gone are the hopes for salvation, reincarnation, or miracles. Only cockroaches breed. As out of dreams, nightmares are bred; bred when dreams are shattered. Shattered when nightmares are dreamt.

     My dream has become a nightmare; my nightmare has become a reality; reality is useless to me now. Reality used to be my push. My push? Drugs… Money for meth, cash for chronic, hundreds for heroin. Ask and you would receive. It was a pleasure to serve, to provide that high, to fix what was broken. If only temporarily.

     It was my world, crumbling though it was; recession, war, political upheaval. Dope did provide escape; I provided the means to get away from it all. Now it is gone, all lost, to the whim of man… With a command, with a word, apocalypse has come. There is no fix now, no escape, not even temporarily.
 
     These roaches that I step upon, they are all that is left, all that has survived, and me… It was not supposed to be like this, but there you have it…
    Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-15 01:18:26 | Rating: | Views: 118
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dude you are one whos writing i have much respect for around these parts. i loved this. great job
Posted by  hollowman  on 2009-10-15 01:23:46 
  
You can be very bleak.
Posted by  stevehayes13  on 2009-10-15 03:24:39 
  
I'm guessing it can be dificult writing a post-apocalyptic piece in an up-beat manner.

Good stuff, E.
Posted by  Perigo_Minas  on 2009-10-15 08:37:35 
  
Wow Evets, man can you write! Intense, thought provoking!
Posted by  greunie  on 2009-10-15 08:16:43 
  
Hollowman- Thank You for your comments, respect goes both ways, I am glad you liked it....

Steve- I have my moments...

Perigo- I guess I could have written about a post-mortem disco on the day after...

Greunie- I never have fancied myself much of a short story writter... But your words are much appreciated...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-10-15 08:51:18 
  
Your ability to paint a vivid image in the minds of your readers always impresses me E. Amazing as ever.
Posted by  spiritualcoma  on 2009-10-15 08:53:48 
  
Siritualcomma- You are a huge part of why my writing has developed into something better than what it was when I first came to thoughts. Your compliments are never taken lightly... I am humbled....

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-10-15 08:56:36 
  
As I was reading this it was as tho I were clinging to each word not wanting to let them go.. AMAZING..STANDING OVATION...BRAVO AND WELL DONE....

I AM SIMPLY BLOWN AWAY...
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-10-15 09:38:21 
  
NEVER try to fry cockroaches in a microwave. They get fat, fly around like bats out of Hell. And do not die.
Posted by  TomasSISI  on 2009-10-15 14:10:36 
  
Monica- Thank you My' Lady, thank you very much...

Tomas- My mom always said that only two things would live after a nucular war: Cockroaches and the Dopeman....

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-10-15 20:39:45 
  
Maya references to 2012
The present-day Maya, as a whole, do not attach much significance to 2012. Although the calendar round is still used by some Maya tribes in the Guatemalan highlands, the Long Count was strictly employed by the classic Maya, and was only recently rediscovered by archaeologists.[16] Mayan elder Apolinario Chile Pixtun and Mexican archaeologist Guillermo Bernal both note that "apocalypse" is a Western concept that has little or nothing to do with Mayan beliefs. Bernal believes that such ideas have been foisted on the Maya by Westerners because their own myths are "exhausted".[17] Mayan archaeologist Jose Huchm complains that, "If I went to some Mayan-speaking communities and asked people what is going to happen in 2012, they wouldn't have any idea. That the world is going to end? They wouldn't believe you. We have real concerns these days, like rain."[17]
Posted by  jloyola  on 2009-10-16 05:51:42 
  
I've never known anyone who can paint with words quite like you can, my friend. "Like blood pooled in the corners of the world." Wow! I just love it when you do that :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-16 07:37:10 
  
JlOyola: What proof do we have? I guess we just wait and see.... Thanks Brother...

Boots: I think you are just over sensationalizing an average write.... But my thanks to you for your support....

Much Love...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-10-17 04:22:25 
  
Cockroaches. They say those critters were some of the only survivors of the cretaceous period, and will be the only thing to survive a nuclear exchange.

Well done, my friend. Well done!
Posted by  Wheresmycoffee  on 2009-10-17 07:35:51 
  
Coffedude- Cockroaches are some of the nastiest critters in the world....

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-10-17 13:13:48 
  
2012--Rise of the cockroach.

Thousands of druggies are now paranoid their fixes are going the way of the world.

I too liked the blood pooled in the corners of the world.
Posted by  lynbarnes  on 2009-10-17 13:49:28 
  
interesting analogy.. those who thought they were butterflies will be distressed, I'm sure, to be outlasted by cockroaches..
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-10-17 15:03:25 
  
Lynbarnes- Or fall of the Dopeman... Or millions of Cockroaches are excited to know they will live through the end!

Pastor- I think they will outlast us all...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-10-18 03:39:04 
  
roaches.
Posted by  bloodintheeyes  on 2009-10-19 09:18:29 
  
Blood- Don't waste them. Save'em for later...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-10-19 09:29:22 
  
Niiiiice. You *are* a poet, Evets. I've said it before but it bears repeating. I love this sort of wordplay-- and you just swim and flip and dive in it like a dolphin, round and round, creating whirlpools of language.
Posted by  dreadnaught  on 2009-10-21 04:54:09 
  
You trying to make me blush? I was just writtin, not flippin and floppin! O,o

Thank You Lady....

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-10-21 22:55:43 
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