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 Hollow
Spirit away this residue of hate;
long consumed.
That mine slate be made clean.
For upon that barren field,
may my sins be forgiven, consumed;
spirited away as residue upon the winds-
of this bitter soul…
    Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-06-22 16:34:00 | Rating: | Views: 88
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wow beautiful
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-06-22 17:54:46 
  
Monica- Two words spoke with such volume are treasured by such a humble scribble...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-06-22 17:59:38 
  
really this was really beautiful, simply amazing
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-06-22 18:01:09 
  
Thank You my friend...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-06-22 18:06:18 
  
I like the tone you've achieved here. I really like the implication of forgiveness.

--lyn
Posted by  lynbarnes  on 2009-06-22 18:09:06 
  
Lyn- This is my attempting to forgive myself. Not sure if I relayed that properly...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-06-22 18:12:30 
  
yes- you did.. I liked all three of these poems- they sound like change- of address, of heart, of purpose...
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-06-22 18:54:17 
  
Pastor- All of the above my friend. Some alteration for the poem "COLD" may be inbound but I will wait and see how it develops...

Thank you very much...

Peace,

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-06-22 19:03:11 
  
((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))
Felt you needed them. Whenever you fell low, lost or lonely, just remember I'm hugging you and I love you bro
xxx
Posted by  angelwings  on 2009-06-23 05:42:46 
  
I know you do! But fear not I am sound...

Thank You, Sis...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-06-23 08:27:53 
  
Short, sweet and very deep. E x
Posted by  overthehillandfar...  on 2009-06-24 10:14:08 
  
You are carrying heavy burdens E, Please share them. Do you remember the song "he ain't heavy?" This verse reminded me of that song.
Posted by  circe  on 2009-06-24 19:37:44 
  
Auntie E- Just some deep thinking come to words...

Circe- My burdens are mine to bear. It is the price I pay..

Love...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-06-25 03:53:28 
  
Such strong emotional burdens it seems are weighing on your shoulders. May they lift soon, with joyous times to come. *Hugs* I love ya!
Posted by  brlracincwgrl  on 2009-06-26 14:19:09 
  
Ashley- Things are definately looking up! Life is chaotic but everything is going in the right direction! Thank You...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-06-26 17:54:02 
  
That was so beautiful.
Your writing makes me speechless. :)
Posted by  EasyBev  on 2009-06-28 06:26:30 
  
Bev- Thank you so much... Man, only if you were a famous publisher!

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-06-28 09:38:46 
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