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Falling

Shall I apologize for these tears?
For the trails they trace from saddened eye,
across broadened cheekbone,
to leap from masculine chin?

I have seen you Capitalize on your moment of need,
where my support was integral.

Yet now it is my moment…
And the favor is not returned.
It is rejected.

My hand is slapped away,
when I reach to you for support.

I am falling.
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Dedicated to my brother with the utmost respect and love. I am sorry you must bear this burden...

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-05 23:33:16 | Rating:

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God Bless

Posted by jloyola on 2009-10-06 00:08:57

Be at peace.

Posted by funfreak on 2009-10-06 00:12:42

JLOyola: Rough times my friend but it will pass.... Thank You

Funfreak: I wish my brother peace. I am happy to be there for him... Thank You...

Pieces,

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-06 00:27:33

glad we had a moment together when He could smile..

Posted by pastormike on 2009-10-06 01:14:14

And smile he did Pastor, you are much liked by him. He and I both found you to be an extremely interesting person! Hope to see you again soon. One day I shall write of our meet, but time is moving faster than my pen...

Pieces...

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-06 01:20:13

love to see the picture..

Posted by pastormike on 2009-10-06 13:07:27

A rip-your-heart-out poem. The intensity screams subtly through your words.

Posted by greunie on 2009-10-06 14:10:44

I can feel your anguish and I hope it all gets sorted very soon. Your friend Elaine.

Posted by overthehillandfar... on 2009-10-06 14:58:31

:( peace and love, xx

Posted by lolav on 2009-10-06 15:06:11

All is working out. Just some patience and time.

Thank You...

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-07 00:04:05

You're back, and in full effect.

Have a (rare) man-hug.

Posted by Perigo_Minas on 2009-10-07 04:01:22

Perigo- You're all soft and squishy in the middle!

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-07 11:22:48

Wish I could help somehow, my best to you and your Brother.

Posted by circe on 2009-10-07 21:54:34

Ahhh my friend. My apologies for not writing of our meeting as of yet. It will come in time... Our visit was a blessing that occured just prior to some difficult times. All will be well in time, this I know...

Pieces...

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-07 22:23:28

*holds out a hand and straps on to a giant tree* Great write E. <3 Scar

Posted by Evanescence on 2009-10-08 02:17:49

Life has it's moments...

Thank You Scar...

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-08 02:18:57

I will catch you......my hand is offerd,my ears are listening and my heart is willing...

Posted by monicaspeaks on 2009-10-09 12:10:13

I wouldexpect nothing less than the best from you my friend...

Thank You

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-09 12:38:52

I like the wordplay on Capitalize. The big C, the fact that not only is he capitalizing on your support, but also you are integral to the organization, like a capital city or some such. Very cool.

Posted by dreadnaught on 2009-10-13 12:31:49

Dread- Thank you so much for these words.... This is about my brother, I only translate the pain I see and feel as he progresses through this rough time in his life...

E

Posted by Evetspordlaw on 2009-10-13 23:13:08