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shattered cough,
Lost breath,
Broken skin,
I am Death.

A single look,
A glance above,
A glimmering eye,
I am Love.

A touch that lied,
Broken Trust,
Lost Love,
I am Lust.

Wondering alone,
Lost Fate,
Never Love,
I am Hate.

A gracious smile,
A golden key,
A gate of Trust,
I am Destiny.

Unbroken lies,
Not left in dust,
An open arch,
I am Trust.

A broken smile,
I do defy,
What is truth?
I am a Lie.

A happy time,
Everyone's strife,
You'll never forget,
That I am Life.
    Posted by ErikT626 on 2009-07-29 04:15:54 | Rating: | Views: 48
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Simple effective prose ... very well done.
Have a look at the Creative Writing Forum on the Forums page, the Scribbles Challenges are out once a week and you might enjoy the challenge.
Sue;)
Posted by  Keep_Left  on 2009-07-29 08:55:48 
  
nice writing
Posted by  jenniferjones  on 2009-07-29 16:58:42 
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