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 Thrown together .. yes I'm bored!
Dammit I'm missing you
It's only been a day or two
I'm used to hearing the rhythm of your voice
But today it seems I still have no choice

You are busy, you have things to do
But dammit I'm still missing you

I wonder if you're thinking of me
Do you miss me? I guess we'll see

Your time is your own,
but you've been sharing it with me
Now I just expect it can't you see

You can't just take it when you please
Don't think I haven't noticed my stolen hearts' keys
You have them all, you hold them near
I gave them to you, even with the fear
that our future although bright is never 100% clear

I'm learning to trust you, I'm doing my best
But my memory and past makes each day a test
To see if you'll care and look after me
Dammit I miss you, can't you see?
    Posted by EasyToSay on 2008-05-24 09:06:02 | Rating: | Views: 136
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very very very nice easy!!! 5 stars! it's funny how we write from our own minds and hearts but still manage to captivate eachother's feelings as well. *hugs*
Posted by  Katydids_and_daisies  on 2008-05-24 15:09:55 
  
Beautiful poem. Loved the line "hearing the rhythm of your voice". RF (the guy who shares my birthday) had the greatest voice in the world. Hearing him would make my heart flutter and bring feelings of calmness and safety to my spirit. That I will most likely never hear his voice again makes me sad. Just like Katydids said our poems and words do captivate each other's feelings. Peace.
Posted by  ColoradoDreamin  on 2008-05-24 19:43:07 
  
this is great :) i agree with coloradodreamin i love "hearing the rhythm of your voice" *hugs*
Posted by  pixierose  on 2008-05-24 21:21:48 
  
This is lovely E2S, you are quite the poet honey mwahh xx
Posted by  missmarie  on 2008-05-24 21:23:29 
  
This really felt like my own thoughts...except that it was my thoughts being expressed more poetically and in a much more beautiful way that i could ever express them :)

This was beautiful easy, i can identify with each feeling in this.
Posted by  angelwings  on 2008-05-26 02:08:59 
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