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 The hidden desire
I lit a candle and placed it by my bed,
Just like you had asked.

I lay awake waiting, breathing slowly
Hoping the moment would last.

My eyes closed
You were not coming.

I felt lonliness wash over me
As I wept desire was betrayed.

Then I felt your arms around me
and your breath against my neck.

You turned and kissed me,
I held you tight, even though you smelt of beer.

Your tongue was soft and wet
It tickled me as you nibbled my neck.

The light flickered on your face
as you made love to me that night.

The way your eyes looked into mine
I hoped it would be fine.

We had forever baby
But that was when I knew you were mine.





** Found this at the back of a pad in my top drawer.
Thought  I'd post it, even though it's pretty ordinary.  But I found it for a reason...... xx
    Posted by EasyToSay on 2008-08-01 07:34:54 | Rating: | Views: 141
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I liked it, good writing x
Posted by  southernsun  on 2008-08-01 07:41:43 
  
Nice.I agree with southersun.Good writing,Easy!
Posted by  HardThinker  on 2008-08-01 09:14:27 
  
I loved it Easy. Desire that is fulfilled yet still with the doubt shining through in your words. Well done.
Posted by  Katydids_and_daisies  on 2008-08-01 12:24:23 
  
Great post, E2S! Thanks for sharing!
Posted by  Mandie142  on 2008-08-01 16:08:11 
  
sweet thoughtsxx:)
Posted by  Passiongurl_23  on 2008-08-01 18:51:39 
  
Very pretty :) It wasn't that ordinary, I reckon. Pads seem to contain a lot of good reading..
Posted by  Mezlie  on 2008-08-02 05:38:05 
  
Hey K, You holding back on us???? Good post!
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Posted by  lastblastkl  on 2008-08-02 20:38:53 
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