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 Behind Closed Doors
Mother
If I were different
(Would you love me?)
Father
If I were different
(Would you be proud of me?)

I've been dreaming of suicide
And been thinking
Maybe I should just die
Maybe then you'd be happy
You'd be happy if I were dead right?

(If only I were born to somebody else
Anywhere but here I'd...
I'd be happier...definitely...)

[So I scream
At the top of my lungs]

[As I bleed
All alone in the corner
Of your eye]

Mother
(I'm never good enough for you, am I?)
Father
(Don't you have anything to say to me?)

Big sis
You set the bar too high
(If only you were different)
Maybe then I wouldn't be
So damn depressed
I'm SO done with
Living in your shadow

(If only I were born to somebody else
Anywhere but here I'd...
I'd be happier...definitely...)

[So I scream
At the top of my lungs]

[As I bleed
All alone in the corner
Of your eye]

(Behind closed doors
I'll die)
[Screaming while I bleed
Hoping then you could hear me]
    Posted by Dragon_Raid on 2009-07-13 18:26:32 | Rating: | Views: 38
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Very magnificent.
Posted by  whitecastle7  on 2009-07-13 18:45:16 
  
I love this. I feel your frustrations
Posted by  findingsolace  on 2009-07-14 14:58:04 
  
i used 2 write suicide poetry.. i wud write about thinking of commiting suicide, and my friends commiting suicide..... all true...... but then i found that if i really had committed suicid, then my friends and family would all be sad...... rumor has it that if u commit suicide, then you live your 2nd life the same hell as it was before.... so this might not make sence but just look at the benefit of the doubt!! be happy for who and what you have........ i almost start to cry when i hear that over 5,000 kids have committed suicide that have better lives than me......
just write about how much teen life sux!!!!! or adult hood sux..... whatever age u r....... just leave suicide as your last resourt!!
Posted by  hannahbear01  on 2009-07-14 19:18:48 
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