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 salty kiss.... ***CAUTION***
***CAUTION  This may be a little offensive to some***
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Softly you whisper sweat nothings in my ear,
Saying that you love the way I hold and caress you
That it melts away your fear.

I tell you that I love the way your body fits me like a glove,
the way you move, the way you smell, the way you make me feel,
you must be a gift from high above.

The candles are burning softly and the fire is burning low,
You have captivated my mind with the things you do
and the way your body looks in the lights glow.

You are a sensual angel sent to tempt my very soul,
I kiss your mouth, I kiss you neck, I fight
to keep control.

You purr ever so softly and that is the key that I need,
To taste your skin with my tongue and move down slowly
careful to hasten my speed.

In the light of the candle your breasts with nipples erect,
I move to them and tantalize
what else would you expect.

Your back has arched and I can feel, your anticipation building in side,
I slide my tongue down to your navel
and slowly I set my stride.

Like a beacon begging the ships to come to the shore,
My tongue finds a warm wet place,
and comforts it more and more.

Parting pink lips I find myself a tasty salty treat,
I play, I fiddle, and I take my hands
as I grab you by your seat.

I lift you up to meet my mouth and you softly moan,
my tongue starts slow, but then moves franticly,
ready to take you home.

Your arms come down and grip me with the strength only passion can bring,
your body jerks, your muscles tense,
the angels start to sing.

My lips taste salty with the spoils of our sensual trek,
I slide back up on top of you,
and gently kiss your neck.

Bringing my mouth to your lips you surprise me with a mischievous grin,
You slide your tongue across my lips
to sample your salty fluid from within.

You kiss me deeply and without words let me know you love me dear,
I shutter a moment overcome with emotion as I
Loose all restraint and fear.



I guess I will stop here I could write more but I really need to get some work done. I figured with all the bad mojo floating around I would give tantrix something to read she maybe able to relate to?? lol haha Let me know what you think... I guess I could do better with the right inspiration.
This is just off the top of my head (s) hahahaha

 
    Posted by DouglasMB on 2008-06-28 14:56:23 | Rating: | Views: 337
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OMG...Is it hot in here or what? WHOA!
This is a good piece or erotic poetry...and who ever it was meant for or maybe will be meant for....shes in for a treat!
Posted by  dreampower  on 2008-06-28 15:35:59 
  
lovely !!!!
Posted by  lizzie  on 2008-06-28 15:43:56 
  
Thank you ladies
Posted by  DouglasMB  on 2008-06-28 15:51:41 
  
Hot I think I need a cold shower now, no wait maybe it is you Doug that needs the cold shower. lol

Enjoyable and enough to send the pulse racing. Thank you.
Posted by  KP  on 2008-06-28 15:54:43 
  
Ooh...(clears throat) um...wow...yeah...um...wow...lol x honey, if you're single, it is a TRAVESTY lol xxx ;-)
Posted by  chebtastic1  on 2008-06-28 16:15:18 
  
HOT HOT HOT ... Hold on the firemen are ringing the bell and the cold water for my bath is about to overflow. Brilliant writing, Douglas.
Posted by  ColoradoDreamin  on 2008-06-28 16:48:20 
  
thank you
Posted by  DouglasMB  on 2008-06-28 16:54:55 
  
Oh MY GO........ODNESS!!!!
The top of your head seems to be about right there Douglas! lmao
I await another... :P
Posted by  tantrictouch  on 2008-06-28 18:29:41 
  
well well, what do we have here? :) so what happens next? :)
Posted by  LuckyLuci  on 2008-06-28 23:22:56 
  
hmmmm Dougie, you've started the keys tapping... I had an awesome dream last night, and now I've enjoyed this ... look out though I think HOT AVATARS and HOT POSTS here we come!
Great Doug!!
Posted by  EasyToSay  on 2008-06-29 02:49:39 
  
I have to wonder what's deeper in that brain you have Doug.
Someone pass me a towel.
Posted by  anotherdaze  on 2008-06-29 10:43:10 
  
I think you definitely hit the spot there hun.
Well done and i can't wait for another post.
Posted by  misselusive  on 2008-06-29 12:18:31 
  
Maybe more to come next week we will have to see if the mood strikes me... I have it in me, but getting it out through clutter that my walk in of a closeted brain can be sometimes is a chore... kinda like my typing and spelling... for the most part I know all of this stuff but most of the time either my brain is moving faster than my hands or my hands faster than my brain. And I it looks like you can actually read it??? I dont go back to fix it. lol lazy? maybe.... but if this is thoughts... it comes out on here just as jumbled as it is in my head lol haha
Posted by  DouglasMB  on 2008-06-29 14:40:22 
  
great writing!
Posted by  Country_girl  on 2008-06-29 15:08:05 
  
**tips his hat to country_girl** thank you ma'am
Posted by  DouglasMB  on 2008-06-29 15:14:50 
  
This was incredible! I wanted to be this girl in the poem so bad!!! This is the stuff I dream about! Write more!!
Posted by  bluefish36  on 2008-06-30 00:14:45 
  
wow....very skillfully written ;) well done, doug!
Posted by  angelwings  on 2008-07-01 05:11:14 
  
Wow you made me want to... well hmmm all I can say is YUM!!! ;) XXX
Posted by  gypsie_lee  on 2009-06-23 00:02:14 
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