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This is a possible story idea that I forgot about. I wrote this about a year ago and I wanted to pass it along to get an opinion on it. This story is pretty much narrative and there may be some words that are misspelled for that I do apologize. I do a copyright all my stuff, even the shitty stuff so please no plagiarism. Please give me your thoughts, if you like it or not.
Thank you and enjoy
The man in the iron trap
plot
Two brothers are born into this world that live total separate lives due to their parents. This is the story of Alexander and Nicholas Masters. Now the story begins with Michael Masters a man of great wealth and of a extremely well assembled family tree. His family's network value is around about $8 billion mainly because Michael's great great grandfather was a very successful minor in the year 1888 and he discovered one of 250 of the most rare diamonds in the world. It was the world's first diamonds that frequently changed its color to match its surrounding therefore got its name as the secret diamond. Since then his family owns all 250 of the secret diamonds.
Michael Masters in his time was some want of a pretty boy to got what and whom he wanted to since the age of whatever. As Michael started to lose sight of his youth he started to go into overdrive fucking anything in his site and was quite fond of the local prostitution syndicates. On one winter night he was looking to deed the usual whomever available a good ass waxing he was practically horny that night. So he goes and picks up one of the local prostitutes but this particular prostitute was extremely different than all the rest with a very sad but interesting story to tell. Now Michael usually was never interested in what a low life whore but this was very different. The moment he looked into her eyes he had a moment known as a moment of clarity and he had a feeling that his life would be never the same. Michael Masters fell in love with this prostitute but he didn't like to think of the woman he loved as a prostitute. So he took her off the street and moved her in to the Masters estate. The Masters estate was literally a castle that was moved over from Norway and brick by brick was moved over and was placed on a large piece of property 5 miles away from Miami, Florida. The castle was looking like the woman (Brandy shooter) ever seen in and she was instantly in Paradise. Within three weeks they were married or leased engaged mainly because Michael's mother (Martha Masters) didn't really like Brandy shooter at all for some unknown reason.
Now well Brandy shooter wound up pregnant this at was forbidden in the Masters family way of living if you were not married. The pregnancy infuriated Michael and had second thoughts about his sudden burst of love. He knew well and good that the pregnancy was he is doing but was delusional and he swore up and down that it couldn't have been his so they made an arrangement. She would stay on the Masters estate until she had the baby and after the baby was born he would support her and the baby extremely well but otherwise he would not have anything to do with the Brandy shooter at all
nine months later on a early fall day of pair of twins were born she named the first one Alexander in the second Nicholas. Michael had no idea that Brandy was carrying twins and he handed a wicked idea. The idea was Michael would take Nicholas and Brandy would take Alexander. Michael thought that was a fair deal and some twisted way of thinking and then they took to entirely separate corrections in life. There was one thing that they both had in common they wear extremely smart and Michael made a nether arrangement stating that when they were old enough to attend college that he would fund Alexander's schooling and what ever feel he choose. That was the deal and he kept his deal.
So they lived their separate lives never once seen one another until they reached college.
Michael Masters made sure his son Nicholas had everything his heart desired as he did growing up. The finest of everything absolutely everything Nicholas even had a favorite bottled water that Michael had imported from Hamburg Germany. Butler's wait on him night and day it was wide he felt was the perfect life but he missed out on one thing Michael Masters was never there for his son. Birthdays he was gone school advance he was gone everything he did not care but in some weird way Michael would do anything for him financially. Nicholas sat in his room all day playing the latest virtual reality games and listening to the Christian rock band red sand. He liked other music by Christian music was the only type at his grandmother Martha Masters would allow
meanwhile Brandy and Alexander was at the opposite end of the spectrum they had absolutely nothing. The only thing she could do to keep money on the table and food in their mouths was to prostitute herself out again and well made matters worse eventually they lost their small department that they can afford ironically the payment was prostitution. The two young people had to move into their 1972 ford Pinto in which she also had to you use to supply her customers. The only escape that Alexander had was a local arcade in which he could not afford to play any of the video games. It was absolutely terrible that Alexander even then at that young age knew that his mother was using her body to make money.
They course was very difficult for Alex to handle but he had to nonetheless. He knew exactly what was going on and did not do anything about it. It was as close to hell and his two people can get without losing their lives. And this was driving in the crazy.
Meanwhile Nicholas and his family was living very well except Nick was still very much alone because Michael Masters was still doing the things he is doing.
Finally Michael decided to keep his end of the deal and assist Alex out financially because of a gigantic business deal in Las Vegas. He was feeling very generous. So Alexander would now attend the same school and events as his brother. This was very hard on the both of them because for the both of them it was like looking into a mirror. It was also harder on them because they were not around each other for very long time. And even though the two looked exactly like they've were to completely different people with completely different personalities. On their 11th birthday they had a tremendous disagreement and a fight broke out between them and things were not the same for a very long time
Years later
There senior year at royal hunts high school was a big blurr. They were about to graduate at the top of the class at the one in two spot with only a one-point difference in their grade-point average efficiency between them. They were about to enroll in to the same college but with two entirely different majors. Nicholas Majors in psychology while Alex majors historical military tactics and the Art of war. He was always fascinated with brutalizing war maneuvers Alexander found it very soothing to him. While Nicholas was fascinated with the human mind. Nicholas and Alexander still did not like each other at all. They would try everything in there power to sabotage one another. They both fantastic grades but something sat sour with Alex and even though he was at the top of his class he decided to drop out after only two years. On the other hand Nicolas would eventually graduate with a Phd in Psychology. It only took him to use to receive it. He would eventually get his own practice five years later. His father offered to buy him one but he wanted to do something all on his own. Michael granted a son's wish. He also went on to finance his other sons rescue party because he wanted to make it look like he really cared because of a story about him surfaced in the press and he wanted to seem squeaky clean. Obviously he was not.
Alex layed low for sometime and went to different countries to learn how to efficiently kill people. He found it to be quite fun. He travel country to country learning different styles, methods and logic's for justifiably murdering somebody. He also went there to soak in alternative lifestyles that seemed to him better than his own. Psychologically he still had many things wrong with him that have to do with his childhood. With the death of his mother weighed heavily on his shoulders his psyche was in a far different place. Then he disappeared off the map for a time. Only too emerge years later as a self certified statistic genius. To pray mostly on sexual predators but eventually that we'll not be enough.
On the boys 25th birthday there was a great party held at the Masters estate for Nicholas. It was to be a full 24-hour party costing around $1 million hosted by Michael Masters. There was enough alcohol there to fill the Nile River and enough female companionship services to fill a French whorehouse 10 times over. This was Michaels true currency. The elite of Hollywood superstars and some of music's finest musicians were in attendance. It was the biggest thing the young man had ever seen. To top it all off Michael gave Nicholas the greatest gift you could ever receive. Michael and pulled out a envelope and handed it to him. Nicholas opened the envelope of and he pulled out what looked like a contract a business contract and some very thick legal papers. He looked at them and realized that they stated that he was 50% owner of Masters Enterprises which was his father's most prestigious business which pulls in at least $75 million a year. Naturally the boy did not know what to say but he was on the full according to his IQ results. He immediately signed the papers and then consumed more alcohol than you ever consumed in his life. He did this with one condition that he would still keep his practice open. His father agreed.
In the background there was a man that seemed to be very content with this news. This man was the long-lost brother and he was furious and getty like a schoolgirl all at the same time. Alex comes up with a plan that we'll set him up for his whole life. Since everybody thinks that he's gone he will use that to his advantage. He will kill his father and take his brother Nicholas some place and switch places with him and torture him for fun?
Alternate ending
or he will kill his father and frame is brother for the murder for sweet revenge?
More to follow?
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