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 Stopping the Fall
It has been a  LONG time since I've written anything, so be nice! ha.



He said " I really  need to go,
I have to seek my dreams,
It's something I need to do,
No matter how silly it seems."

He wiped the tears from her eyes,
Kept himself cool as she pled,
Giving her a final hug and kiss,
"Please wait for me" he said.

On a lonely bus headed west,
He leaves behind a love that's true,
He can feel himself start to fall apart
But still thinks this is what he needs to do.

Days turn into weeks then months,
He can hear her pain with every call
And so he contacts her less and less,
But pushing her away doesn't stop his fall.

On a ranch thousands of miles away,
His fire burns in the cool night,
As he looks at the stars, he thinks,
Without her, his dream just doesn't seem right.

Fearing she's moved on he stays,
Falling further apart day by day,
He wants to go home, to hold her tight,
But he just can't seem to find a way.

And so up at dawn to go to work,
He tries to carry himself tall,
Though deep inside he wonders,
If, without her, he will ever stop this fall.



* Repsonse to Scribbles Challenge #50.
    Posted by Country_girl on 2009-11-02 20:07:31 | Rating: | Views: 57
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And you're back! :). I loved it.
Posted by  brlracincwgrl  on 2009-11-02 20:22:29 
  
That was beautiful and so sad :(
Very good effort!

Posted by  kellie1979  on 2009-11-02 20:46:54 
  
Really liked that CG!!! Take some time to flex your creative muscles!
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-11-02 22:05:11 
  
Best thing to do is pick yourself up and keep on keeping on....

Nice to read you again lady...

E
Posted by  Evetspordlaw  on 2009-11-03 01:09:28 
  
Wonderful to read and wonderful to see you back.
Posted by  overthehillandfar...  on 2009-11-03 03:41:40 
  
I've never "met" you, nor have I read your writings up to now. I intend to remedy that situation immediately! Well done!
Posted by  Wheresmycoffee  on 2009-11-03 04:09:35 
  
Very good interpretation of the challenge theme. Nice work.
Posted by  Perigo_Minas  on 2009-11-03 11:20:22 
  
Thank you everyone :)
Posted by  Country_girl  on 2009-11-03 15:54:21 
  
Love it CG!!! Great job:)
Posted by  SnoopsMama  on 2009-11-05 14:24:01 
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