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Bad News
Gazing with tearful eyes
At the letter which brought with it
So much sadness, so much lies
Uncovered only by a note.

Written so vaguely,
So unemotionally formal,
Was that letter unruly.
Leaving me as hopeless as a turtle.
Posted by Bubbly on 2008-05-02 02:38:19 | Rating: n/a | Views: 93


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Posted by
lampoil
on 2008-05-03 22:12:34
 
very visual wording.
 
 


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