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 Underneath the Bed
Mandi Fraser was wise enough at the age of almost-eleven to know that there really were no such things as a monsters under the bed.  But, that didn’t stop her from making a wild leap across the floor and onto her bed the second she flipped the light switch off.  You know, just in case.

Mandi wasn’t old enough to understand the concept of hedging her bets, but that’s exactly what she was doing nonetheless.  Kids who took risks got into trouble. Everybody knew that.

Most nights, Mandi was left to her own devices.  Her Momma was usually too exhausted from working her two jobs to oversee the bedtime ritual, so, as a rule, Mandi would brush her teeth on her own, get into her pajamas, and tuck herself into bed.  No big deal.  Even if one were to overlook her ritual of arranging her bedclothes just so before the “lights-out leap” in order that she could dive completely under the covers, head and all, it was still no big deal. And her heart thundering at breakneck speed for at least five minutes after she’d landed safely on the bed, that wasn’t particularly worrisome either. What was worrisome were those rare occasions when she’d mistime her takeoff or flub her landing.  Those were moments of pure terror, and although she knew it was silly and childish, she couldn’t help how she felt.

Mandi had always been taught to face her fears, but sometimes this was easier said than done.  She supposed that if she were to take her time and get down on her hands and knees and peer underneath her bed, she’d see for herself that there was nothing but a couple of dust bunnies and maybe a stray sock under there.  The problem was that doing that could place her in mortal danger should there actually be a monster lurking.  So, as much as she would have liked to be certain that nothing was there, she felt equally sure she didn’t want to know for certain if something was.  It was a troublesome situation.

One night, just a week or so before her much-anticipated eleventh birthday, Mandi was preoccupied with thoughts of parties and cake as she was performing her bedtime ritual.  Because she wasn’t entirely focused, her foot caught the corner of her bedside rug just as she’d flipped off the light switch.  Her trajectory on “the leap” went horribly awry, as you might expect, and she landed in a heap, half on and half off of her bed.  Her eyes had not had time to adjust to the sudden darkness in her room so her panic was magnified tenfold.  Maybe even twentyfold.  She scrambled up onto her bed so quickly that it almost seemed as though the flubbed landing had never occurred, but she became entangled in the blankets instead of enfolded in and protected by them.  That’s when she first heard the thumping.

It was coming from under her bed.  Thump thump thump thump thump.  She managed to yank the tangled blanket free and pull it up over her head, but she could still hear the horrible thumping. It seemed to be getting louder. And faster.  Mandi’s mind raced back over her stumble.  Hadn’t she felt something odd with her right foot?  Something which shouldn’t have been there?  Yes, she was sure now that she had.  She was sure that she’d kicked something just under the edge of her bed and wakened it.

Thump thump thump thump thump.

She knew now that all of her nights of careful planning, her practiced leaps, and her skillful dives beneath the blankets and all been for naught.  She’d botched it up big time and now It was awake.  She did the only thing she could think of to do.  She opened her mouth and tried to scream.

As is the case with most truly essential screams, especially those we attempt during nightmares or when our very lives depend on them, Mandi’s scream came out sounding like a thin warbly wheeze.  She’d put everything she had behind that scream, but the breathy sound was barely audible even to her own ears.  She knew her Momma couldn’t possibly have heard it. She was done for.

It was becoming very warm under her blankets and she knew that there was not enough air under there to last very long.  Already her labouring lungs were trying to persuade her to peek out just for a second for a big gulp of air.

Thump thump thump thump thump!

She had no choice.  She needed air to scream.  She lifted just the corner of her blanket and sucked in a great ragged gasp.  And then she screamed for all she was worth, “MOMMA!!

Momma came flying into her room.  The glorious light from the hallway spilled in with her.  Mandi threw herself into her Momma’s arms and sobbed, “Uh-uh-under the buh-buh-bed!”  Momma hugged her very tightly but she could still hear it.

Thump thump thump thump thump!!

Momma stroked Mandi’s hair and told her that everything would be all right. She tucked her back into bed and kissed her forehead. Never even once did Momma say that Mandi was just being silly.  Mandi loved her more than ever for that.  Then Momma bent down and looked under the bed to show Mandi that there was nothing under there.

There was one more thump! as Momma vanished beneath the bed.  And one more sad little wheeze that should have been a scream.





Happy Hallowe'en :)
    Posted by BootLady on 2009-10-31 07:32:20 | Rating: | Views: 416
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I was sitting around waiting for my newspaper to be thrown when I came across your story Boots. I enjoyed it very much!
Posted by  mtvonca  on 2009-10-31 08:01:07 
  
Thanks, Mike! Glad I could (ahem) kill some time for you :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-31 08:02:10 
  
Very good story. Left me wanting more as all well told tales must.
Posted by  Tony51203  on 2009-10-31 09:53:33 
  
Thanks, Tony :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-31 12:04:56 
  
oooh.... a good scary story... one can never trust the "under the bed" thing...
Posted by  Olla  on 2009-10-31 10:19:18 
  
Even at my age, it's still a little niggling doubt in the back of my mind. Most of this is written from experience :P
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-31 12:05:47 
  
I couldn't possibly read this to my 8 year old as she is so frightened of bedtimes she would most definitively never sleep. Very well done.
Posted by  Moxi  on 2009-10-31 10:58:29 
  
Thanks, Moxi. It's funny - when I was writing it, I thought it might turn out to be just a little girl's imagination. I never really know how they're gonna end until they do :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-31 12:06:49 
  
First class shock followed by a smile............ya got me!
Posted by  uncle_charlie  on 2009-10-31 11:12:53 
  
Wow! I got Charlie! My work here is done :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-31 12:07:15 
  
Great ending! There's nothing like a good monster story.
Posted by  Perigo_Minas  on 2009-10-31 14:00:14 
  
Thanks, Perigo. Yep, tis the season :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-31 17:25:06 
  
ooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh - loved it - Puck
Posted by  puck  on 2009-10-31 15:19:42 
  
Thanks, Puck m'dear :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-31 17:25:35 
  
you fair lady, tell a great story, loved it!
Posted by  skip1957  on 2009-10-31 17:26:53 
  
Most kind of you, kind sir :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-10-31 17:27:38 
  
Under the bed, in the closet, behind the closed shower curtain. Is no place safe from you wicked people? Loved this, Boots.
Posted by  Firewater  on 2009-11-01 00:02:40 
  
Thanks, Firewater. Oh don't get me started on the shower curtain. Ever since I read The Shining I've never been the same :|
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-11-01 07:06:04 
  
Loved it! Nothing more to say other than it was absolutely fab, Boots. =)
Posted by  Blossom  on 2009-11-01 01:24:19 
  
Thanks, Bia :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-11-01 07:06:25 
  
I'm so glad we no longer have a space under the bed - I've always had a fear of it. After reading this, the fear would be even greater, so thank goodness for divan drawers. Lol
Posted by  overthehillandfar...  on 2009-11-01 07:00:45 
  
What a great idea, over! I'm gonna have to look into divan drawers :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-11-01 07:07:08 
  
omg that story brought me back... thanks for the scare! ;P
Posted by  Azalia  on 2009-11-01 10:09:27 
  
It's a blast from my past too :|
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-11-01 19:19:29 
  
Just goes to show.
Posted by  stevehayes13  on 2009-11-01 11:46:46 
  
Yep.
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-11-01 19:19:48 
  
Good grief you brought back flooding memories of Barnabus Collins hand underneath my bed. "Dam" that Dark Shadows!

Awesome read Boots...you scared the pee-waddin out of me!
Posted by  pitapie50  on 2009-11-01 21:07:09 
  
Oh man, yeah, ole Barney (well, both Barney's now that I think of it) was a creepy dude, eh? Sorry about the pee thing, Pita! :)
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-11-02 06:13:04 
  
Boots that was GREAT!! I was coming over to see if that naughty bear Buddy had arrived, instead I read your story! LOVED it!! more please :)
Posted by  EasyToSay  on 2009-11-02 19:52:28 
  
TAG YOUR IT!

Go to my blog and find The Tag Game blog I got. Do it, like it, love it! Or not. LoL! ;0)
Posted by  IrishMike6464  on 2009-11-03 01:21:41 
  
Unless it was momma kicking the monster's arse and making him wheeze....
Posted by  lynbarnes  on 2009-11-03 23:03:38 
  
This story got me a little scared. I am glad I have two cats who keep me safe from the under-the-bed monster. Well, so far, at least. Very good, Bootlady. BTW, I would love to be friends with you. Okay??!!

Hugs again ------------------------------------------------------- ---- Shea
Posted by  Shea  on 2009-11-14 20:31:38 
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