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 endless aisle
Walking down the aisle, I see row upon identical row of bottles... sporting nifty labels identifying their contents as opiates, stimulants, hallucinogenic and analgesics.
Their names are so similar, so rhythmic and soothing that after minutes of passing them by they become a natural chant in the foreground of my thoughts,
One foot, always prompting itself ahead of the other... carrying on like a wound up toy with no eventual liberation.
I ponder my path, my encoded route, and mull my undisclosed yet immutable destination.
How badly I wish to rest... to simply halt for a few momentous seconds and not bear the doubtless hazards of forging on.
But really, what good would it provide me?
The others would surely march on without me... leaving me to chase after their wake of intoxicating powder.
And so I persist... lifting my feet high into the charged atmosphere, a storm snatching at my dusty heels... only to plunder towards the unfamiliar and deepening trail.

    Posted by Azalia on 2009-10-07 21:56:19 | Rating: | Views: 53
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Wow, this is deep and I'm not sure I get it but I do know it's beautifully written.
Posted by  overthehillandfar...  on 2009-10-08 05:26:36 
  
aww thankyou OTH!
really im not entirely sure what it is myself. It was inspired by a dream I had and I just went with it :)
something about our path through life
Posted by  Azalia  on 2009-10-08 23:19:34 
  
that was interesting... well written...
Posted by  DouglasMB  on 2009-10-13 06:49:12 
  
thanks D.MB :)
I dont claim to understand it... just goin with the flow!
Posted by  Azalia  on 2009-10-16 08:59:50 
  
interesting dream.. I think your mind was rejecting the easy way.. and honoring your efforts to do what must be done.. but.. let the others go.. you have a guide within to show the way.. take the rest you need...
Posted by  pastormike  on 2009-10-18 19:26:49 
  
you are a very wise man Pastormike, and I do believe you to be right in that assertation :)
xx
Posted by  Azalia  on 2009-10-18 19:31:31 
  
azalia you have really impressed me with this great post my friend.
i am truly sorry that i have'nt ben by in a while but i have really been preocupied with things that are going on at home.
i hope you can forgive my rudeness.
i am spending the day looking and commenting friends blogs, hee he and you happened to be first in line.
oh and by the way TAG YOU ARE IT AGAIN HA HA HA
have a great day
regards fraglerock
Posted by  fraglerock  on 2009-10-19 03:48:17 
  
thankyou kindly dear Fragle!
but I do feel lucky to be first in that line :)
xo
Posted by  Azalia  on 2009-10-20 21:39:58 
  
Sounds like a groaning little rant about walking the aisles of prescription drugs in the back room at a pharmacy turned into a poem of sorts:P I thought maybe you were working at such a place as a temp.
Posted by  brainstormer  on 2009-10-20 23:14:21 
  
haha wouldnt that be fun. but no, this was a mysterious creation of my mind...
Posted by  Azalia  on 2009-10-22 22:43:59 
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