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 Now is the time...
So sad and crying throughout the day
There is nothing more I can say
Nothing else I can do
but hold my head up and make it through
It's so hard right now I can't sleep
My heart feels stabbed so deep
Confusion will not leave my mind
but I know it will leave in time...
Teardrops fall down my face
Now I have to find a place
No money and a dream destined to come true
no matter how depressed I am, this is what I have to do
Frozen in time for awhile now
Looking for an answer to why or how
I guess everything happens for a reason
and thats what I have to believe in...
Can't stop the tears and thoughts that are racing through my mind
I wish I could stop and just fast-foward through time
Be in the future and my dreams would come true
No more tears and feeling so blue
I am scared but know that things will be alright
I need the sun to come out soon, so I can feel bright.


    Posted by ArtistJ on 2008-07-27 03:28:08 | Rating: | Views: 161
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if it is bright doesn't depend on the sun,it is depend on yourself,look at things in a bright way,everything will be different.
Posted by  nina880224  on 2008-07-27 21:34:29 
  
Your gonna be ok, you just need a little help to learn how to deal with things. Trust me things will get better and never give up. Take time to notice the good and don't take less than what you deserve in life. For example try for a job you thought you could never get. Surround your self with people. You are a lucky girl and you don't even know it. Look around and you will see that. ps thanks for the I m , I do wanna talk to you but I had to pack for vacation. I will send you a message when I get back. take care.
Posted by  michelle8angels  on 2008-07-27 23:08:50 
  
Dear ArtistJ,
Now I liked this poem.
It conveys a moment in your life when you are feeling lost and confused.
It showed me a side of you that we all share in common.
It's that time when we are unsure of what is to come of us and how we are in need of someone close to share it with.
This style of writing reveals the deep compastionate thinker you are.
I have shared those same feelings you talk about here and you put your feelings to words very well in this poem.
I would love to see you write more poems of this nature and in them express all the other emotions we all have in common.
GOOD WORK!

Love & Peace,
John
Posted by  jwcj  on 2008-08-02 04:23:16 
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