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People like to make you feel bad
Even when they know you're sad
You say I have some problems and what is wrong with me
I just need some happiness and just let me be
It doesn't feel good to have people bring you down
Do you get off when you make me frown
I do have some issues like most people do
Sorry that I'm going through a rough time but at least I am true
Talk sh*t about me, I have heard enough
Yeah, I am not that happy but I am trying to gain that back
and I am going to get on the right track
Maybe I am a little confused and under stress
my brain needs some long time rest
People think everything is so simple
it's not like looking in the mirror and popping a pimple
I know what I need to do, and I don't need people talking to me with a negative attitude
Treat me like I have serious problems, "is she on drugs"?
No- I have anxiety and I just need some real love and hugs.
I work so hard and am so nice, so maybe think about it twice.
I look out for people who I care about
Right now I want to sit outside and shout-
I am grateful for everything I have and am looking for what the future will bring
One day I will have my business going and maybe a wedding ring.
Maybe I will run away never to be head from or seen?
Too much talk and not enough action
talking with no reaction...
I have a lot on my plate
I have no time to even go on a date
No more complaining about small things
I look forward to what the future brings.
I have a plan and you just don't know
Soon things will change and I will grow.
It really hurts my feelings things I hear people say about me, but I keep brushing it off and picking myself back up. If I could help someone I would not hesitate. I would give the cloths off my back if you needed them. There are some people who are real and others that are fake. They just want a peice of the cake. Happiness is all I want. I don't care about money, just want the stress to stop. I have been through so much in my life you would be surprised. I could write a book and you would not be able to put it down. I just came home crying because my feelings were hurt. Do not judge me because I am going through a hard time. Positivity is the key. Things will get better day by day. Taking anger out on others is not nice, especially when they are so nice.
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Posted by ArtistJ on 2008-07-17 01:46:45 | Rating: | Views: 95
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I really enjoy reading your work...its true what you said about our attitudes and I can't wait to let my best friend read it...:) good job!
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Posted by tabbycat911
on 2008-07-17 01:51:21
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i am tired of saying "i totally understand your feeling!" bcoz who ever really understand another soul?who ever experience the same thing as another one has?? but i am really trying to understand that!!i really appreciate your attitude at the end of the poem...soon things will change and i will grow...i am sure you will and never forget my wishes is always with you...
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Posted by nina880224
on 2008-07-17 01:58:35
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This is Lanabell I used to write poems a lot when I was your age because it did relieve a lot of stress. I know what your going through because at your age your kinda stuck in the middle waiting for your life to happen, but let me tell you I don't have so much mental stress now because as you get older you can train your brain to think more possitive about things and that does save you from having so much stress. I am like you I can't stand it when someone trys to bring me down. I am like talk to the hand don't say anything about me in a neggative way or tone.
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Posted by lanabell
on 2008-07-17 22:44:33
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I dont think your clothes would fit me:P heh. Nor are they my style:P
But, that poem sounded much like a rap by Eminem:P
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Posted by brainstormer
on 2008-07-19 00:48:51
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