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 You..
I would never have thought it. Never have guessed.
I could put back together the pieces you left.
You pulled me apart, and you pushed me around.
But now look where I am and just look what I've found.

He is more than you are, and it's more than we were.
For the first time I see that you're better with her.
The dreams I held on to, of you, and of me,
Are long lost; forgotten. For the first time I'm free.

He's sweet, and he gets me, where as you never cared.
What I feel for him now is more than we ever shared.
When I think of your smile, I feel nothing inside.
No unuttered desires, no emotions to hide.

The way that we were, and the things that you said.
Your words were like bullets, that got lodged in my head.
But just one look in his eyes and I forget all the pain.
The crying, the screaming, the fights in the rain.

You helped make me stronger. You helped me to grow.
Because of you, I'm different. Now that much I know.
You got me to love you, so I'll give you your dues.
But for the first time I'm glad I didn't end up with you.
    Posted by AmyGrace on 2009-06-01 14:28:58 | Rating: | Views: 35
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nice poem.. we have something in common, we both love to write. but i guess you are much more experience and better writer than me, i only started when i sign up in thougths.com hehe! I write from my heart.. i mean i don't know the do's and don't in proper writing hehe! can u give me some tips in writing? hehe!
Posted by  fallenangelrevela...  on 2009-06-01 14:42:25 
  
Nicely written, I don't write poetry so I just asked my ex, "What was your name again?". HAHA
Take care, Greg.
Posted by  gstiner  on 2009-06-01 15:08:30 
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