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 death bed.

this is my death bed
i lie here alone.

i can feel the death on the sheets.

this is my death bed
i lie here alone.

i can feel those old memories

this is my death bed
i lie here alone.

i can here the words"it's time to leave"

im so afraid.
i cant believe this is the end

this is my death bed
i lie here alone.

i can hear those words..."its time to leave, and you'll never be alone again"

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(this poem is basically about how in life i feel so alone....and i always end up thinking that when i die....i wont be alone anymore...)
kinda confusing...
but  ever what.

    Posted by AliveOnly4aMoment on 2007-10-08 21:29:18 | Rating: | Views: 156
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I know what you mean I feel alone also even if theres a lot of people around me. I also think about my death a lot.
Posted by  jasmine16  on 2007-10-12 10:21:52 
  
You are not alone.
We are all in this together.
Maybe you never really had a true friend before.
If you allow yourself to love someone...that is when your loneliness will subside.
I will be your friend.
You are never alone when you let love live in your heart.
I can even give myself a hug of comfort..if that makes any sense.
I am leaving one here for you as well.
A hug of comfort.
You are not alone.
We are all here...just like you.
Peace.
Posted by  DifficultSoul  on 2007-10-13 15:29:04 
  
See you can write a poem! This is what a poem is, a way to express yourself. I like it.
P.s. I know what you mean, i feel alone almost all the time. I hate it. But DifficultSoul is right, if you take the leap and let someone all the way...yo will never feel alone. I have done that recently and he is the only person i dont feel alone with. Just thinking about him is comforting.
Posted by  Brennan  on 2007-10-13 20:08:30 
  
difficult soul/brennen...
mabey i do need to let someone love me. can i help it if im scared to death?...
oh thanx for the hug..actually when i read that it made me smile.
:)
Posted by  AliveOnly4aMoment  on 2007-10-14 14:46:03 
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