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I’ve never been one to give up,
On that perfect, sunny day.
Through clouds and shadows,
I can still see,
The rays of hope,
That peak around those dreary clouds.
I sit and hope,
While still embracing the thundering storms,
The blistering winds
Provide comfort,
A knowledge that all could eventually change.
But there comes a point,
When even I,
The dreamer that I am,
Has to recognize,
Even the ocean won’t move,
If the moon is no longer pulling at it.
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Posted by Achelois421 on 2007-10-16 22:16:49 | Rating: | Views: 82
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Dear Achelois421,
Read your postings.
One word response; "WOW"
I can only hope that you are making a manuscript and not a diary. I consider myself a fairly well read person, and I must say; this is top quality writting and that when you have aquired a bookfull of these, you might want to seek out a publisher.
I am aware enough also to see the writtings come from within a deep hurt in you. I think maybe this is your true calling and that it is through your writting you may find your inner needs.
Be sure to know the difference between your thoughts on paper and what your life really is. It's a fine line and is easy to cross to the other side, if you don't keep your eyes on the prize.
If you want, stick me on your friends list so that I may never miss anything you write. I truely can hear your heart in your writtings and though you are now in suffering, your talent stands out above the masses and the world is in need of your words.
I have long read the words of the dead poets and have always wanted to have known them. I kinda think that you may be the poet of today and your words are touching and deep and moving and thought provoking. I do hope to see you write more, and deeper, and longer on your thoughts.
Sincerely.
jwcj
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Posted by jwcj
on 2007-10-16 23:44:00
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I agree with JWCJ- all I can say is WOW, you are so beautiful in and out and you came to the right place to share your gift- I love this one the best so far but I know you got so many more to come!!!!!!!!!
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Posted by thernandez
on 2007-10-17 19:12:53
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I agree with JWCJ- all I can say is WOW, you are so beautiful in and out and you came to the right place to share your gift- I love this one the best so far but I know you got so many more to come!!!!!!!!!
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Posted by thernandez
on 2007-10-17 19:13:16
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