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 Rleax You Will Bare
It's intirely about: why would we care?
Not how you wrote, not how you fare
but why the readers here would stop and stare
Would gain interest and not worry your dispare

To prove a point, sharp and seemingly unattentive
it should be a point you'd pay for how you live
An eye full that not only statifies but moves through the passage
Fluently and passive, it should seem almost primitive
To how it goes, drawn and how your eye flows, almost unconcious
A ride for your mind, drowned in compostion: a mind Carriage

Beauty is in the construction of literature
The art is the reading and practice of lecture
this business of the renegades is not mere
What is perscribed is building of skill and scripture
A point as i said, so it goes, to make you without fear
of failure for if you have the one essential, you stand clear



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    Posted by 17andstillcounting on 2009-11-02 15:16:00 | Rating: | Views: 14
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